COUNTDOWN -- Manga/Story: Hiroyuki Utatane -- Translation: Sunao Ohmi

Warning!!  This script is rated NC-17

Disclaimer: I am not trying to undermine STUDIO PROTEUS' adapted version
of COUNTDOWN if you would like to purchase this manga please buy either
FUJIMI COMICS' Japanese-only print or STUDIO PROTEUS' English
adaptation.  Scans of this manga will not be available with this script.
This script was created with the fans in mind since STUDIO PROTEUS could
not necessarily provide a literal translation of this great erotic work
COUNTDOWN.  I feel that one of Hiroyuki Utatane's greatest tallents is 
conveying eroticism through imagery combined with the dialog.
If the dialog is changed it changes the feel of his manga.  Naturally I
want to see it enjoyed by a wide audience.  NOTE: I am not an authority
on Japanese translation but I have enough of a handle on it to provide
a script, such as this, for the enjoyment of Utatane fans.  In other
words this should be very close to literal, if you see a mistake please
point it out to me.

Virgin Road was translated pretty accurately by Studio Proteus actually, I 
just did this because it's my favorite story and because I wanted to see if I 
could..

Key: P.(#) = Page number, (a number by itself) = Panel number,
     (a letter) = Word bubble order, CAP = Caption.

Chapter #2:  Virgin Road

P.1
1.   Sign: Nakagawa + Seno Wedding Ceremony
3.A. UnknownA: It seems the other family has arrived
  B. UnknownB: Oh, then I'll go greet them

P.2
3.A. Girls: Itsumi, you look so pretty!

P.3
1.A. GirlA: Congrats!
  B. GirlB: I don't believe a late bloomer like Itsumi is getting married!
  C. GirlC: Darn I thought I'd be first!
  D. GirlD: I wonder if I should get married so I can look as pretty..?
  E. GirlE: Oh yeah, I feel sorry for that man of yours!
  F. GirlF: What're you saying?!
2.A. Wife:  Dear, Are you trying to ignore them?
  B. Husband: Quiet! I'm fine!
3.A. Girls: Oh Mister Nakagawa(? name not specified) that's so cute!
  B. Mr. Nakagawa: Who, what's that?!
4.A. Takaki: Hi!
5.A. Girls: Ah!! Miss Takaki(? no name pronounciation key)
  B. Itsumi: Wow is it really?!!

P.4
3.A. Takaki: Con-grad-u-la-tions
4.A. Girls:  Senpai you're so weird! (note: Senpai = one's senior usually in
     school)
5.A. Takaki: Oh but we're lovers!
  B. Girls:  Kyaa!

P.5
1.A. Itsumi: Wai.. wait, Senpai
  B. Girls:  Senpai, don't do that!  Itsumi's going to cry
2.A. Takaki: Oh?  When I was rejected I cried for a week!
3.A. Itsumi: Don't say such sad things Senpai
4.A. Girls:  We didn't hear a thing from you in a while, what were you up to?
  B. Takaki: Mmm..  I was busy
  C. Girls:  Oh I get it!  You were dating!
  D. Takaki: That's right, I was in a hotel with Itsumi
  E. Itsumi: Se.. Senpai!
  F. Takaki: Ahahaha!
5.A. UnknownC: Brother!  Go see if you can greet the parents of the other 
     family
  B. Bro:    Yeah I'm goin'
6.A. Itsumi: Ah..!  Father umm...
7.A. Itsumi: ....I....

P.6
5.A. Itsumi: Hey everyone can you give me some time alone with Senpai?
  B. Girls:  huh?  OK OK
  C. Takaki: You're all such a bother anyway!
  D. Itsumi: Yep yep!
  E. Girls:  Oh you're mean!
  F. Takaki: Kyahaha!
6.A. GirlA:  Allright see you there!

P.7
1.A. Itsumi: Ah!.... Senpa...i
  B. Itsumi: I'm sorry
2.A. Takaki: It was unavoidable wasn't it?
4.A. Takaki: Mmm....
  B. Itsumi: Mm!
5+6.A. Takaki: It's my fault
  B. Takaki: I didn't think I'd end up loving a woman like you

P.8
1.A. Takaki: With THIS much enthusiasm
2.A. Itsumi: Ah!
3.A. Itsumi: haa.. (breath)
4.A. Takaki: But it's all good, since I'm a WOMAN I can come and play anytime
  B. Takaki: And if we went on a trip together, no one would complain
5.A. Itsumi: Senpai.... Senpai don't.... My-----my...
  B. Itsumi: My wed..ding will start any moment!
6.A. Takaki: So who do you belong to?
  B. Takaki: I'll show you who

P.9
1.A. Itsumi: Ah!  Wha?!
2.A. Itsumi: Oh!!
3.A. Itsumi: Ah!
  B. Itsumi: Ah!
  C. Itsumi: Ah!
5.A. Takaki: Ahh...
7.A. Itsumi: Hi! (a yelping sound pronounced "hee")
8.A. Itsumi: Ah...h.. Senpai please don't..
9.A. Takaki: Don't what?
10.A. Groom: Itsumi are you here?

P.10
1.A. Groom:  Hey, umm?  No one else is here?
  B. Itsumi: Mm.. nope
  C. Groom:  Huh..
2.A. Itsumi: Senpai you wouldn't... would you?
4.A. Groom:  What's wrong? you're blushing
  B. Itsumi: Huh?! Umm... Oh!!  I'm just really nervous!

P.11
1.A. Groom:  Uwaow!
  B. Itsumi: Mhh!
  C. Itsumi: Ha...AH!
2.A. Groom:  Wh... What's up? eheh
3.A. Itsumi: S.. sorry it's nothing
4.A. Groom:  That's ok... oh this is sorta awkward
  B. Groom:  I'm happy to be with you but it's time to go
  C. Itsumi: ?
5.A. Groom:  My mother's waiting too--- s.. so
  B. Groom:  I'll see you later
6.A. Takaki: hee hee hee

P.12
1.A. Takaki: A---hahaha! His mom, how funny! (kyahahaha)
2.A. Takaki: Man, and I was JEALOUS of that guy? hee hee
  B. Itsumi: Huh?
3.A. Takaki: I was afraid there was nothing I could do, sad isn't it?
  B. Itsumi: Senpai
  C. Takaki: Hey let's do it
  D. Itsumi: But...
4.A. Takaki: You're still dripping wet?
  B. Itsumi: No, but, you...
5.A. Itsumi: Oh no... mm... n..

P.13
1.A. Itsumi: Mmm mm
4.A. Takaki: heh heh it looks like the GREAT flood down there doesn't it 
             Itsumi?
  B. Takaki: OK OK no one will know
  C. Itsumi: NO!
5.A. Itsumi: A..yaAAAAHH!!

P.14
1.A. Itsumi: AH kah ha AH!hah Ahn!
3.A. Itsumi: Aoh!

P.15
1.A. Itsumi: Aah! No!
  B. Itsumi: Don't!
  C. Takaki: uhhn, Itsumi, take my entire load... inside you!
2.A. Itsumi: NO!
  B. Takaki: Heh
  C. Itsumi: NoOOH! Pull... Pull OUT! ah hah hah...

P.16
1.A. Itsumi: Ah! It's burning hot!
2.A. Takaki: Nm... Hahhoh..
  B. Itsumi: AAAAAAHHH!!
4.A. Itsumi: Ahhhuh..
5.A. Itsumi: Huh..ff

P.17
1.A. Takaki: Shall we go now?
  B. Itsumi: Ah...
2.A. Itsumi: Ye...s...
3.A. Itsumi: ....
4.A. Priest ...do you vow to love this man for the rest of your life?
5.A. Itsumi: Yes...

P.18
2.A. Itsumi: I do
--END--