COUNTDOWN -- Manga/Story: Hiroyuki Utatane -- Translation: Sunao Ohmi

Warning!!  This script is rated NC-17

Disclaimer: I am not trying to undermine STUDIO PROTEUS' adapted version
of COUNTDOWN if you would like to purchase this manga please buy either
KSS BOOKS' Japanese-only print or STUDIO PROTEUS' English
adaptation.  Scans of this manga will not be available with this script.
This script was created with the fans in mind since STUDIO PROTEUS could
not necessarily provide a literal translation of this great erotic work
COUNTDOWN.  I feel that one of Hiroyuki Utatane's greatest tallents is 
conveying eroticism through imagery combined with the dialog.
If the dialog is changed it changes the feel of his manga.  Naturally I
want to see it enjoyed by a wide audience.  NOTE: I am not an authority
on Japanese translation but I have enough of a handle on it to provide
a script, such as this, for the enjoyment of Utatane fans.  In other
words this should be very close to literal, if you see a mistake please
point it out to me.

Key: P.(#) = Page number, (a number by itself) = Panel number,
     (a letter) = Word bubble order, CAP = Caption.

Extra Manga from Count Down/Temptation KSS Perfect Collection OAV book
Studio Proteus Version = Count Down Extra

MIROIR AUX ALOUETTES
-Beginning- Pale Blue (? is this a reference or analogy?)

UTATANE HIROYUKI

P.1
1.A. My little brother Akira has become a bit prettier.
2.A. No... OH!  St.. Don't!
  B. Akira no!
  C. Stop!

P.2
1.A. Stop?  Stop what?
  B. Mmoh
  C. N...
  D. Oh..
2.A. Sis, you won't let me go will you?  --- and not only that, you're
     impotent with anyone but me
  B. Aaahn!
3.CAP: Yes, only Akira can satisfy me
  A. Uhff huff
4.A. Haan---!

P.3
1.A. Mn
  B. hffblp
  C. Mmpff
  CAP: And so I endulge myself in him --- but now I can't shake my fear
2.CAP: That if he knew he would surely ridicule me
  A. Uh..
3.A. MnAhh!
4.A. huff ah..Ah!
5.A. hiahh!
  B. Ah!

P.4
1.A. No!
  B. fuah!
  C. HAAA!
  D. Ah!
2.A. Nuhhh
  B. Huff
3.A. Haa..
  B. Mn
  C. Nnn
4.A. MnAh!

P.5
1.A. Nnahh!
  B. Hi(pronounced "he")..ah, com..ming, I'm gonna cu....
3.A. ---!
  B. Hian!
4.A. !, No! Don't!
  B. Don't come into me!
6.A. Nnuff
  CAP: And then
7.A. Fuahh!

P.6
1.A. Aaahh!
2.CAP: Akira disobediantly came deep within my vagina
  A. uh.huff...
  B. ---hu...ah..ah..ahh...

P.7
1.A. Ha...ah..
2.A. Ah...
3.CAP: A while back Akira altered himself to be my double

P.8
1.CAP: I wonder how I look as he rapes me?  I
2.CAP: I can't see my own face, just that of my look-alike assailant
3.A. As I look into the mirror's reflection of Akira I see an equal but
     opposite image of myself. -----

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