Atashi wa Bambi - Part 6Atashi wa Bambi ~Chapter 6~ by Maki Youko Translation by Sai-chan Archived at Atashi wa Bambi and ::fizzy pop:: (do not take or use elsewhere without sai-chan's permission!) ------------------------------------- Translation Guide: "Spoken words" Narration Thoughts Handwritten text [Actions] (My notes) (I didn't translate the sound effects. But I think you know what kind of sound is being made by their actions. =)) If you find errors in my translation, please let me know by e-mailing me at saimare@magicgirl.com. ------------------------------------- (PAGE 1) Who is she? Minami: "I'm Minami. Call me Minami, but anything is fine!" (PAGE 2) [Minami smiles at Mai.] Minami: "Yaezou and I were always together in class during junior high. We were friends." Minami: "It's nice to meet you, Mai-chan." Mai: "Yeah! Nice to meet you, too." [Minami stands back, arms crossed, and looks at Mai and Yaezou.] Minami: "So, what's this?" Minami: "You two are going out right?" [Mai starts to speak but Yaezou talks over her.] Mai: "No-" Yaezou: "NO WAY." Mai: "!!" Words on Mai's head: MAI. Minami: "......." (PAGE 3) Minami: "How is Sen?" Yaezou: "...He's fine. How are you? Yup, he's fine." Yaezou: He has his usual troublesome expression. [Mai looks a little surprised/confused.] Minami: "Is that so?" [Minami notices a clock.] Minami: "Waa! It's already this time! I'm going!" [Minami starts to leave.] Minami: "Yaezou! Let's hang out again, okay?" (PAGE 4) [Minami smiles.] Minami: "Mai-chan, too." [Mai and Yaezou watch Minami leave.] Mai: "......." Mai: "Hmm... Anyway, she's a busy person, isn't she?" (NOTE: Not sure about this translation. I *think* it's busy/rushed, but I'm not sure.) Mai: "Hey..." (PAGE 5) [Yaezou looks reeally mad/irritated/evil.] Mai: "WA!! What a negative aura!!" Mai: "What... Is something wrong?" Yaezou: "No... Let's go home..." [Mai grabs Yaezou's shoulder and he covers his mouth.] Mai: "Eh? Something's worrying you. Tell me!!" Yaezou: "......." Mai: "Hey! Tell me!!!" [Evil SD Mai is yelling at Yaezou.] Words above Yaezou: You're even disgusting when you speak. I know! Mail: "TELL ME!!" [Yaezou regains his composure.] Yaezou: "......" (PAGE 6) Yaezou: "Sen used to go out with Minami." [Mai is shocked. Sen's face flashes in her mind.] Mai: "......" (PAGE 7) Yaezou: "But I think it's nothing you should worry about." Yaezou: "It's in the past." [Mai pushes Yaezou really hard and he falls over, then Mai covers her ears and shuts her eyes.] Yaezou: "!!" Mai: "No..." Mai: "I don't want to hear those things. I don't want to hear them...!" [Yaezou, on the ground and shaking, is mad at Mai.] Yaezou: Didn't you tell me to tell you!! And you're angry!? (PAGE 8) [Mai looks really sad and Yaezou watches her. Then it's {presumably} the next day at school.] (PAGE 9) [Mai is resting on her desk, sighing.] Flashback Minami: "It's nice to meet you, Mai-chan." I'm a stranger. She used to like Sen. She's cute, a part of his past, and she's a good person. It's tricky like that. [A figure walks up behind Mai, whose head is on her desk.] Though it's not a reason to get me to seriously turn around. [A loud noise gets Mai's attention.] Mai: "!" (PAGE 10) [Sen is holding Mai's arm; he's pulled her onto her feet.] [Sen and Mai are outside now.] Mai: "U... um, is something going on?" (PAGE 11) [Sen pats the ground next to him.] Sen: "Well, sit down." (PAGE 12) [Mai and Sen are sitting down next to each other.] Sen: "You cried yesterday." [Mai looks shocked. SD-ish Sen turns towards Mai with blank eyes.] Sen: "I heard from a certain person that 'She dropped tears and sniveled. If you hadn't said those words, she wouldn't have had that face. It was ugly.'" Mai: "It was YAEZOU, wasn't it?" [Sen looks down with his eyes closed.] Sen: "Why?" Se: "Don't think that deeply. You..." (PAGE 13) [Mai looks hurt and gets really gloomy/depressed.] Sen: "Ah----..." Sen: "It's not like that." Sen: "I'm insufficient with words." Sen: "So" (PAGE 14) Sen: "........ I'm not very good" Sen: "at being in a relationship and stuff like that." Sen: "........ Something more slow..." Sen: "Having a relationship and stuff immediately... Don't feel rushed..." [SD Mai looks a little surprised.] Mai: "....." Sen: "...." Sen: "So--..." Sen: "Think right." Sen: "Don't go with the trend." (NOTE: Not sure about that translation.) (PAGE 15) [Mai looks at Sen and he watches her. Then she looks down and starts to shake.] Sen: "....." [Sen hits Mai.] Sen: "Don't laugh." (PAGE 16) [Mai is smiling now.] Sen: "Hey!" I had a few words with Sen. I get hurt quickly, and I cry, and I'm a bothersome girl. But with Sen's petty few words, I am also awfully happy. (PAGE 17) [Mai is skipping through the school.] Mai: "[music note]" [She stops.] (PAGE 18) [Yaezou notices Mai.] Yaezou: "That face looks successful, right?" Mai: "huh" Words on Mai's forehead: I am happy. Mai: "........." Mai: "Thank you, Yaezou." Mai: "....... But why did you do that kind of thing for me?" Mai: "Yesterday, too... You listened to my story." (PAGE 19) Yaezou: "It's fine now." [Yaezou looks down.] Yaezou: "Because no matter how much I love Sen, Sen isn't able to love me." Yaezou: "Even you probably know that." [Mai is surprised. She and Yaezou just stand there in silence for a while.] (PAGE 20) Yaezou: "Sorry." Yaezou: "I said it meanly." [Mai shakes her head.] Yaezou: "So, don't worry about me." Yaezou: "Because I'm fine now." [Yaezou walks away, but Mai just stands there.] (PAGE 21) [Mai continues just standing there, looking down, while other students walk by.] (PAGE 22) [Later, Tomo talks to Mai while she and her classmates pack their bags to leave.] Tomo: "Mai-chan, I'm a club committee member from now on. Are you okay with going home ahead of me?" Mai: "... I understand it's like that." Tomo: "I'm not sorry!" Sen: "Would you like to go home together?" Mai: "huh..." Sen: "But together with Yaezou, too." [That surprises Mai.] (PAGE 23) [Mai, Sen, and Yaezou are all walking home together. Mai is holding a handkerchief and she looks irritated.] Words next to Mai: Cannot adjust body temperature, but... [Mai looks at Yaezou.] (PAGE 24) [Since she was looking at Yaezou, Mai accidentally bumps into the back of Sen.] Mai: "!" Mai: "Ow... Sorry." [Sen is frozen in his spot, and his eyes are kind of dazed.] (PAGE 25) [Mai is surprised, but then she sees what stopped Sen: Minami is standing a few feet away.] [Minami notices them.] Minami: "Oh!" (PAGE 26) [Mai and Yaezou are surprised.] [Minami comes over to them, waving, but Sen is looking away.] Minami: "I hoped to see everyone again. You came!" (PAGE 27) Minami: "Sen, have you been doing well?" [Minami reaches for Sen's arm.] Minami: "Haven't you grown a bit?" [Sen slaps away Minami's hand.] (PAGE 28) [Minami is surprised. Sen looks kind of evil.] Sen: "Don't touch me." [Mai's face is red.] (PAGE 29) [Sen turns around and starts walking away.] Sen: "I'm going home." At that point. I don't know what the world is. I am weak, and I saw that face of Sen's, but I couldn't feel my legs. (NOTE: She actually said that her legs were empty, but I changed it to she couldn't feel them so it makes sense.) That place didn't hurt terribly. (PAGE 30) I wonder why. Being carried in love. It looks so wonderful. I yearn for it so much. But, until now, the people reflected in my eyes-- All of them were laughing and seemed happy. (PAGE 31) [Mai's eyes are blank.] But I'm sure that everyone varies. [End of chapter 6.]